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That line with "Indonesia" is just indicated a log which is where I had just traveled. Thanks sweeties.

Welcome. Take your time.

You are welcomed. Finding another format or longer structure might not be your answer. You just have to be more meaningful and trying to pick the right words and writing ...

Thanks! Nice pointing about the word there, haha. :D

You are welcomed. :D Haha, I was just curious in a way and I think I understand what you trying to do about the shop; well, anything can happen as ...

Reminded me of this cute boy. :( zzz Haha, although it is different story. EDITED: Rewatched it again and CRIED again. ;(

Haha, it's okay, people interpret things differently (because of that war happens,) haha No problem.

I'm glad you can relate. Relating is a wonderful part in poetry and stories, right? Thank you for the comment.

Thanks for reading my poem, and yeah, I know something flawed romantic part because I am not really into that (I hardly get a special someone, but yeah, idk how ...

Thank you for the review. Yeah, I did agree with something is wrong on the flow, but crap, I couldn't really fix that really much as I wanted the poem ...

Yeah, I agree. Filler space is all I wrote since I was little and I am a filler space. Anyway, thanks~! :)

Nice changes, I think it would look great in a novel sized page. XD

Yeah, glad to hear that. It takes a lot of practices to fully mastering it, but you will do just fine. And because of this chapter got a bunch of ...

I don't have suggestions and my suggestions are awful. xD But you can incorporate something that really symbolized what you meant in the title--something concrete is preferred. No problems. :3

No problem. But I may give you a proper review later, just so lazy now. XD