fruit4you

Thanks so much! :)

Thank you so much for the info and criticism. The main character is supposed to be a bit dull because for much of this he doesn't feel in control. He ...

For example. I fall in front of people. I can choose to laugh along and understand this happens to everybody, or I can choose to be angry and hate filled.

The world will always be what it is but how you experience it is up to you.

It is. Your perception on the world makes it what it is.

That's what I always tell people when they call me weird! It's a good outlook! Be happy for your uniqueness! It gives you way more zest than people who are ...

You're not weird. Everyone else is just too normal. :)

Well I'm sorry you were offended that to me "me monster" sounded similar to "me want cookie". I just don't like how "me monster" sounds. I'm not going to praise ...

I totally understand what you're trying to do now! Okay, in the examples you sent me they all flow to the next stanza without an awkward pause. I don't really ...

Oh wow. I feel silly! I already reviewed this long ago and even made similar comments about Tinkerbell! What a laugh!!! Haha good day!

Fruit4you here to review! I absolutely love this. It is a jovial poem. I cannot express my love for this. :) But I think you meant "With a small bucket ...

Hello love! So first and foremost, lovely. This and the first one are my favorites. I love the structure of the two poems and they both read so effortlessly. I ...

Sorry double comment... On my phone. It's a bit tricky.

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The no capitizalation gets to me on this poem. Putting that aside though, I enjoyed this poem very much. I also like your nose referencing from your last poem. Also ...

I'm still loving it! :) Again, I also can't help but to agree with niteowl, but I really like these.