fruit4you

I like the confusion of it, if you intended that. It was short, but I think it needs to be. It's a good description of somebody who thinks they are ...

AHHH!!!! I love this. I love simple poems. I enjoy the rhyming very very VERY much. I love the ending. I honestly don't really know what to say. I just ...

It is indeed moving. Personally I've struggled with suicide, and I can relate. Sometimes you feel like not dying but merely drifting away. I feel that if I swallow enough ...

I like the repetition. I like the simplicity of it. I do think it relates to many teens and their love. When you are a teenager and some one tells ...

I like the idea of being compared to the candle. When I read this I felt a sense of loneliness and abandonment. I felt like, if I were the one ...

I love it. It is indeed short, but length is not the issue. I mean there are six word memoirs. They tell an entire story in six words. Anywho, I ...