User avatar

fructose

fructose

  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: The Ott(er) Friend

    Hi! I really liked this poem and how expressive you made it. The image you drew is beautiful, and I can imagine how the speaker feels through the way the ...

    Feb 21, 2024
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I don't hate her.

    This is really really good. As someone with sisters, it hurts to see someone’s personality develop and give a reflection of yourself. It’s strange to directly see how the things ...

    Aug 31, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: i am waiting for myself to be myself again

    Hi sbernsley!! I really liked this poem. The way you express these feelings can often be very hard to put in writing, but I think that you captured it beautifully. ...

    Jan 8, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: The Last Night of Summer

    I really liked this poem. The way you describe everything so peaceful and warm reminds me of the way summer nights feel, so there is nothing wrong with the way ...

    Jun 7, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: when you break your arm

    Hi Crypto!! I really liked this poem of yours, but I hope you don't mind if I suggest some improvements!! I'll keep it short, I have a million things on ...

    Oct 17, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Are You Angry with Me?

    Hello!! Before I say anything, I just want to mention that I really liked reading this poem!! The surface is amazing, and the more I read it over the more ...

    Jul 14, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Hidden Holding Hands

    Hi!! I’m not going to send a lengthy review on all the flaws of your poem, because there really isn’t much. I haven’t written a review in a while, so ...

    Jul 14, 2021


We are all apprentices in a craft where no one ever becomes a master.
— Ernest Hemingway