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Re: Teenage Management
A very well said essay although there are some sentences that you need to improve to make your essay better. :)
Oct 5, 2013 -
Re: Technology: What would be life without it?
oh thanks :)
Oct 5, 2013 -
Re: Technology: What would be life without it?
thank yoou :D
Oct 5, 2013 -
Re: Teenager's Different Colors
''Teenager's Different Colors''. i like your title. nice idea about that. your thesis statement is great. you did a good job.
Oct 5, 2013 -
Re: Life is Different Especially when you’re a Teenager
you did a good job in this essay. your title catches my attention and i like that. your first paragraph is very meaningful. you define teenagers and that is great. ...
Oct 5, 2013 -
Re: "Technologies’ Progression, A Way to Development"
a very well said essay. keep it up. don't stop writting an essay. :)
Oct 3, 2013 -
Re: Technology: Part of Life
"Technology like art, is a soaring exercise of the human imagination." nice quotation. i like your introduction about technology but there are some part that you need to improve :)
Oct 3, 2013 -
Re: The Unveiling of the Disguise
your title caught my attention. you are a good writter :)
Oct 3, 2013 -
Re: Technology of life
your essay was not that bad although there were a few wrong grammars.
Oct 3, 2013 -
Re: The Uses of Communication
your essay was good. although there are some wrong grammars and spelling but it is okay.
Oct 3, 2013 -
Re: “Technology can help”
your title catches my attention. keep up the good work :)
Oct 2, 2013 -
Re: Pros and Cons Nowadays
your title catches my attention. keep up the good work :)
Oct 2, 2013 -
Re: Technology: What would be life without it?
yes thank you very much nate.
Oct 2, 2013 -
Re: Technology: What would be life without it?
thank you very much for all of your comments and suggestions. i will sure that it will help me a lot. actually this is my first time to wrote an ...
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