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Hi there! It took me a minute to realize the last part of the story was part of the song. *smacks forehead* Anyways, onto the review. Hands won't barely move ...

WOW. So this review is going to suck. Just a fair warning. xD I was totally engrossed in your story that I didn't even look for mistakes. I loved how ...

Hi there! This is my first review in about...4 months? So, bare with me xD On the next day the villages pulled the canoe from the center of Kyentril back ...

Hi there! This was short, but any longer and you would have overdone your point. So, I praise you on your size. Your vocabulary was good; there wasn't any words ...

Hi there! I am glass melting on sunburned skin; Now, I'm not too sure, so correct me if I'm it sun-burnt or sunburned? I'm not entirely sure... but they're falling, ...

Hi there! I haven't been reviewing in a while, so I thought I'd give this a go. he kept his eyes focused on the storefront reflected in the rearview mirror ...

Hi there! First off, I suck at poetry. So if anything I say is wrong, or you just feel like ignoring it, you go right ahead and do that. xD ...

Hi there! Frag reporting for a review! This was really good! There's only a couple of things I picked up. On my fifth birthday, my brand new bunk bed collapsed. ...

This was very good. I wasn't really paying attention to mistakes because I was totally wrapped up in the moral. These few lines really got to me. He didn’t seem ...

Hi Shina! Boys were stupid. How true :lol: I gripped my chest. Brennan’s wry smile fell from his face. This part was too choppy. I think you could combine them ...

I agree with most of the other posts; the imagery is great! There's just one little nit-pick I found: She flinched, eyes suddenly wide. Stroking her gold watch, she said, ...

P.P.S: It also comes with a pink elephant from Sarah :elephant: Or maybe two :elephant: I was going to review this, just to bug you, but I won't. :D

Hi there! I can see through your lies, I see the green monster in your eyes. I think you should break this up into three lines. It would look better ...

Hi there! I really liked this poem. It was an exceptional piece of work you should be accredited for! A lament echoes. I think you should change that to "A ...

I agree with Flower... It has a good message, but the poem just doesn't flow. Right about at "Flaws cause problems ", I got a little bored with the poem, ...