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OhMyGod, this was hilarious. The rhyme in this felt natural and flowed really well. I didn't see any rhythm problems. But, I can't punctuate for my life, so... Google is ...

Um well the other two reviews basically did all the corrections. But, this was an excellent story which you really should continue. Develop the character of her architecture teacher and ...

Karen looked out the airplane window as they landed. Three hours in the air had led them to this . The sky was dark gray, the grass was covered by ...

That was amazing! I was just waiting for the happily-ever-after, but somehow it was made better that it never came. It was sooo sad, but in a good romantic way ...

Amazing poem here. The rhythm was nearly perfect which isn't something you see very often. I loved the repetition in this too. The way you compared the dance to blood ...

I think I already nitpicked this one to death, so no more bad stuff (for now :P). But, I love the title, really draws you in. And of course the ...

Tell me what you think, I'm not much of a poet so I'd like some feedback! The party was loud. My head was silent. The faces were unfamiliar But when ...

Such a pretty girl, Such a shame. Wasted in her own self-doubt, Wasted in her own hatred. Such a beautiful boy, So much pain on his face, so much pain ...