fluteluvr77

I loved this poem, it was really original and an amazing theme. Personally, I don't like too much formatting in a poem. But, it seemed to work well for you...The ...

Hey there Ballerina! Your story's pretty good...I'm going to go over the nitpicks first, concept stuff is at the bottom...All of my comments are in caps...:P Chapter 1 The Opera ...

Aww, Evi covered all the nitpicks!!! :(...Guess I'll have to go with the concept-ish stuff now... Theme - Whoa, I loved it! It came out really well...I guess, by Em's ...

'Kay twin, the idea was pretty good...Em's review pretty much covered the concept issues. So, I get the nit-picks! Yay!! :) Chapter 5 “See, there’s the big dipper, and there’s ...

I really liked this piece. I think it was a little too short. Develop the ideas a little more. Maybe outline the differences between a friend and a true friend ...

Hi! The edits in this piece are in caps... Not sure where I am going with this, I just was bored so I started writing. I may write more, not ...

Alright, so it seems like the other reviewers dealt with all of the nitpicks I had for this story. So, I guess I'll deal with the conceptual stuff... :P ~Development ...

Glasses of wine and and cups filled with sin, I'm assuming the two and's are just a typo mornings of thought following nights filled with gin intentions they fall and ...

God, I can't stop laughing hysterically. Haha, I loved how the poem is sooo bright and un-reasonably happy. I love the transition between the happiness and unhappiness. It has a ...

Great poem here, Princess...I'm really sorry that this happened to you. I'm glad you were able to talk about it, in such a way. I loved how this poem was ...

'Kay, this has already been nitpicked by the other reviewers. So, I guess I'll deal with the concept-ish stuff... 1) Theme -- Absolutely loved it. It's unique and something I ...

'Kay so, bad stuff first (because y'know I'm just pessimistic like that :twisted: ) We walk on the little curb, Little is an icky word twin. Use something else, like ...

Wow, just wow. I can't believe that a 17-year old just wrote that. I mean that was unbelievable. It was the kind of story that I can't find much wrong ...

Wow, this is really good...such a nostalgic theme...I didn't notice anything wrong with it. I actually thought that the rhyme scheme was good and I think it flowed pretty naturally. ...

Punctuation issues, which I've fixed here: So what? I didn't know You knew, but you didn't let me know I expected it, but in so I was unprepared, lost in ...