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No problem! :D

Thank you! I stylize my poems that way to give it a sense of lack of emotion or emptyness.

Thanks! The capitalization is just me styling my poem. I style a lot of my poems that way because it gets across a feeling of little emotion.

thank you! the capitalization thing is more of a stylization thing. it may not be grammatically correct but it is very much my aesthetic lol

thanks for the feedback! what i tried to say was that without a true love, the world didn%u2019t make sense. That ending part basically means that %u201Cyou make my world ...

thanks for pointing that out m8

thanks! i was trying to go for more of a depressed, irrational side of me rather than a greedy side but now that you mention it i kinda see where ...

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Yah no problem! I liked the dialogue with no quotes.

Hey, OniiChan here! The Bee Movie. You did a great job on this. It has a very happy, bright feel to it. I like your flow and pattern of rhymes. ...

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Aaa thanks

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Hey, Onii-Chan here! Wow, this was deep. I’m a bit bipolar so I can partially relate. I love how you used a virus in a computer to compare with your ...

Hey, Onii-Chan here! Great poem. I love how complex it is. It really makes you think :) It’s great how you describe the complexity of ourselves. Just one thing: I ...

Thank you so much! I tried putting a lot more effort into this one. I am currently being trained to become a decathelete, so that should be fun!