fishsashimi

wowie i haven’t reviewed in a while lol Hi there! My name is fishsashimi and I will be reviewing your piece! You did quite well on grammar and spelling but ...

!Hey there! I’m BiruKun. My reviews are very brief and short, so you probably won’t get as much out of this review then most. I really like this poem. I ...

Hey, BiruKun here! I like to review, but mine are short, so don’t expect anything big! Great job! One thing I loved is how you incorporated all of the small ...

Hey, BiruKun here! Nice job on this! I think this is the best you’ve done so far, which means you are progressively getting better! One thing that I noticed was ...

Hey, OniiChan here! Great second chapter! I think the plot you set up is pretty interesting. Another thing I liked is how you weren’t leaning towards any religious belief about ...

Hey there, OniiChan here! Great poem about people worrying about money. One of the things I noticed is how you organized the lines. You did very well on doing that. ...

Hey, OniiChan here! Wow, big words. I love this poem! You used an extremely complex vocabulary (I had to look up a few), but keep in mind that not everyone ...

Hey, OniiChan here! I read this to a friend and they looked at me weird. Great poem! I have separate opinions on each stanza. 1. This made no sense, but ...

Hey, OniiChan here! You wrote this in elementary school? I could barely write a haiku then! This is such a cute poem. You did a good job on the rhyming ...

Hey there, OniiChan here! Great job on your first chapter, a short summary of the aftermath of a car crash. One thing that got me was who Ali and Carlo ...

Hey there, OniiChan here! This is a good poem overall, about someone encouraging another. One question: is this a metaphor for life? The second stanza made it sound a lot ...

Hey, Onii-Chan here! Amazing work! You wrote this really well. One thing that I have to say: this poem was PAINFULLY long. I was almost hoping it would end earlier. ...

Hey, Onii-Chan here! Great poem! One thing was that I was a bit confused on what it was about...? I later understood though. Great poem about someone who worries about ...

Hey, Onii-Chan here! I love this! It’s great that you are able to capture your family history in a poem. I really don’t have many suggestions, you did so well! ...

Hey, Onii-Chan here! Great poem! Great poem about a person who longs to show the world who they really are. I like the repetition of “One day”, but I think ...