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fireheartedkaratepup

  • Lyrics » General, General Re: The F.U.N. Song.

    I love this. I love parodies. I love you. There's not much to review. XD Thanks for posting this. (I have a hard time singing parodies in my head, though. ...

    Jun 2, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Disgrace to Wolf - 1

    A shadow was moving with its back towards me. Good job on the proper use of its! ^-^ I think this would be better as "A shadow was moving, its ...

    Jun 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: echoes

    ZILLY'S FEATURED AGAIN! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY ^ Ohboy, caps abuse. XD This may very well be sub-par, just so you know. I'm off my game today. (Just ask Kamas

    Jun 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: One More Day

    Awww, this is so sweet! I sorta know how this feels. :| It really reminds me a lot of "You Belong With Me" (you know, the song by Taylor Swift). ...

    May 31, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Chapter Ten: The Arrival

    SOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUULLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL I don't have the time to read everything and write a review right now, but I wanted to say hi. This is mah spot! MAH SPOT! >;( Good on ...

    May 31, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Could Have Been Both of Us

    Pup here! I'll try to help. Yes, I was confused and yes I felt used but I new from the start you would never abuse If you want the repetition ...

    May 31, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Coming Clean

    Hellooo! Pup here to Bamboozle you. ;3 (I do hope that turns out to be a good thing.... *sweatdrop* Well this time is different. There should be a comma after ...

    May 31, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Demon

    .....that banana kinda drives me nuts. O.o (I tend to repeat things in my head, so I have a love-hate relationship with gifs.) *ahem* Anyway. I didn't have a problem ...

    May 31, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: small girl, little legs

    Wow. This is rather amazing. No, I'm not joking. It took me half the poem to realize you were talking about abortion--the phrases "nurses that kill" and "cheery, homicidal nurse" ...

    May 31, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: So It Goes

    I kinda love this. The way you describe how time seems to stop, the way the world looses color--it's never been that way for me before, but it's such a ...

    May 31, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Life Part 1

    Hello! Puppy the Bamboozler here, with a new review for you! (I couldn't help myself.) My greatest fear is not that I am inatiquate, Haha, the word is spelled "inadequate". ...

    May 31, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Bone Queen

    Hrn. Dun listen to pop. -_- (No offense to him.) I don't think this really needs a deeper meaning. It could have one, it could be expanded upon, but it's ...

    May 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A page for ghost notes

    WHOOHOO KAMAS POEM I've been meaning to check out your work, and I like reviewing poems best, here. Not sure why, maybe it's the length. :P (Long stories make me ...

    May 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Stuck in a Dead F**k

    .........the conservative side of me is wondering why I even bothered to click on this, the paranoid part is hoping my parents won't see it, and the part that prefers ...

    May 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Old Friendship

    Helloo! First of all, I really like this. I get what you're saying about old friends, because I feel much the same way. Why it seems so shameful – It ...

    May 30, 2011


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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