fireheartedkaratepup

Not sure if this goes anywhere, really--someone let me know if I should move it.Anyway, there's this chart about the stages of relationships--how people go from meeting, to bonding, to ...

Gracious, the title looks cheesy. Anyway, review away! Spoiler! : Backstory!There were three weavers--exactly the same, except one was lazy, one was careless, and one measured carefully. They each had

I had noooooo idea this would get the kind of response it did... I only expected about four comments. Instead, I got about thirty-five.This is not about works, or about ...

I'm not trying to be preachy, honest. This is my heart. Well, God's heart, I think. But it needs critiques too, so... hammer away. :3 Edit: This is what I ...

Longest poem I've written! :OPrayer rooms are good for cultivating thought. Spoiler! : So, this spawned from the song You found me and expanded from there. It's written somewhat in ...

Yeah.... I got mad.You don't even know,You stupid, clueless boy,That the way that you've been treating meHas made my heart a toy.You don't even realize, You foolish, bumbling lout,That my ...

Decided to experiment--three words per line. Let me know if it works, or if it unnecessarily breaks up the flow.Fire like waves--severe passion blossoming,crashing into thewalls built aroundhearts, ha

First! I like using slang--in songs, I write the way I speak.Second! I know there are cliches here. Ok? Ok.------------My body's movin'To the rhythm of my soulThe beat starts in ...

Bluuuuuuuuuuuuuuuh. This needs work.------------Can you love meThe way I want to be loved?Can you touch meThe way I want to be touched?Can you move meThe way I want to be ...

Everyone! Two words: Unreliable Narrator.-------------Starving forA speck of truthIn the void ofConfusionSwirling aboutIn ideasThoughtsTheoriesNonsensical to the ear And to the mind.Coming close--Is t

Submitting this to the Dallas Morning News, so I'm taking it off the net just to be safe. If you want to read it, ask me.

This was crap, anyway.

Spoiler! : Edit: Respaced, partially as per some suggestions, but I still can't figure out what I want from this.I like it, but for the life of me I can't ...

She crouched at his feet, a trembling mass of fear. "Hey." She made no move to respond. "Can you talk?" The trembling increased. Well, this is disconcerting. "Hey. So. I'm