fire_of_dawn

"Kitty, when'd you first know? About your being..." "Hm. We should have a name for ourselves. I was two and a half." "Five." "OK. You know, you really are beautiful, ...

Well done. I've lost friends before, everyone has.

I very much enjoyed this poem. The use of Spanish is well-done.

You've had a hard life, I can tell. Perhaps you should encourage others to share their life stories.

And yes, there is a Bible verse concerning this. It says, "Do not let the sun go down on your anger."

Who's the Owl?

Not bad, my friend. I was surprised by the ending. As for a review, well, this could have been prose just as easily. I'm not much for poetry, but there ...

The series starting with "Through Wolf's Eyes" by Jane Lindskold. I don't know the official name of it.

I shall have to get a copy from the library. Actually, I believe the author is still publishing books.

People are writing poetry about my sister? I was not informed of this! Just kidding. A very well-written poem.

A very sound piece of work. I don't really have anything to say... Except that "it's" means it is. "Its" means "belonging to it."

*sighs* Please, please repost this in parts. I can't read anything like this without turning pages, sorry.

I love the Redwall books, I must say. Yes, there are stereotypes (such as genteel or gluttonous hares), but take a look at Martha in "Loamhedge."

So, message me when you edit this, ok?

My biggest concern is to stick with one story. Honestly, right now I'm working on "Cam, Chacen and Fate" (working title, I hope you know) as best I can.