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Thanks. The reason he "has the same religion as humans" is, well, this is a Christian story for furries. Those are people who use an animal to represent themselves on ...

No problem. Could you have a look at my "entry" as well? It's at . Thanks.

...or the heirs. *ducks*

Oh dear. You seem to have forgotten, in a few places, that you were writing in the present tense. Witness- Once nestled in its branches, I examined the rope I ...

Sorry; maybe I assumed her calling him a crazy coyote was enough.

Going to work on the revision I started today; thanks, everyone, for your reviews. If there's anyone on site who's lived in a big city, I'd like to hear from ...

Wow.

What she looks like is a kangaroo...

Haven't seen anything like it. There aren't any spelling errors and everything is where it ought to be.

Hey Bugwhisker. I always did think two or three Clans would be more mangable... but that's not why I'm posting. “Hey!” She hissed Generally you don't capitalize the 'he' or ...

Just for the record, I think you tried too hard to sound like Max. I wouldn't mind seeing a piece written from Fang's point of view for a change.

Don't know what to say except seconding Eri--

I don't know yet.

That's very true... and chilling. I don't have much to say except "good job."

This isn't bad, Hobbit. (I can call you Hobbit, right?) The rhyme scheme is effective and you deal with an important subject. If ever you need something reviewed, don't hesitate.