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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Green skin, glass eyes

    I agree with you - the way you have it now works beautifully! :)

    Jan 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Is Murder a Mystery?

    You're welcome :D

    Jan 16, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: The Middle of Nowhere

    Good! Consider taking a philosophy course sometime in your life - I haven't, but it sounds like fun.

    Jan 15, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Bell To Bell

    Thanks for the advice! I'll try to make the speaker clearer - still trying to work it out. Glad you liked it :)

    Jan 14, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Cranium Cage

    :) I'll make sure to read your stuff! Paradoxes are divine.

    Jan 14, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: The Middle of Nowhere

    Well, thanks for your review! :) Here's something to wrap your brain around: what if Nobody was really a person - in other words, you had the choice of either ...

    Jan 14, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: The Middle of Nowhere

    I will :)

    Jan 14, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Bell To Bell

    Hello! First of all, thanks for your wonderful review! You've given me some very useful advice; I left off "the" and shortened "imagination" and other things because I wanted the ...

    Jan 14, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Bell To Bell

    Thanks for reviewing! :) I'm glad my poem told you what I wanted it to say. Good advice - I'll use it :) p.s. By "nature poor/nature well" I mean ...

    Jan 14, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: The Middle of Nowhere

    Thanks! :) I love your username! Perhaps I'll write the backstory sometime.

    Jan 13, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: The Middle of Nowhere

    Good advice! :) Though the repetition was purposeful, I agree about the dialogue. Thanks for taking the time to review :)

    Jan 12, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: The Middle of Nowhere

    Thanks for the review! :) Emily Dickinson's lovely poem inspired this.

    Jan 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: The Perfect Shell

    You're welcome :)

    Jan 12, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Rebel, yeah...

    You're welcome :) I look forward to reading more of your writing!

    Jan 12, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Dramatic Re: Broken Pieces

    :)

    Jan 12, 2014


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