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Re: A Poet's Dream
You have a interesting poem.I like the simile at the end. I also think you are missing a couple of commas.I think you did a nice job describing the dream. ...
Feb 6, 2010 -
Re: Where you're meant to be
It is a nice poem. What does knowing its coming mean?
Feb 5, 2010 -
Re: Gray
I have no idea what it's supposed to mean it's a tiny little color poem I put together in literally two minutes because I was board. I thought it would ...
Feb 5, 2010 -
Re: when i think of you
Nice poem! I noticed one mistake when you said It makes me feel week I think you meant to say weak. Have a nice day
Feb 5, 2010 -
Re: The Butterflies
oh... ok thanks. I have read some of your other poetry and it is really good. I don't really know how to swim so that explains why I was so ...
Feb 4, 2010 -
Re: Hungry...for Fries?
:lol: Ha Ha Ha I loved it . I also love fries. You should write a poem about chocolate or Superman Ice cream.
Feb 4, 2010 -
Re: Winter
It such a tiny poem I'm not sure what to think of it. I think you should elaborate on your last line. Have a glorious day :mrgreen:
Feb 4, 2010 -
Re: Analysis of John F. Kennedy's Inagurural Speech
I thought it was good. You should an analysis of M.L.K.'s "I have a dream" speech. Have a good day Fiction
Feb 3, 2010 -
Re: Crazed
I am thrilled you like it.
Feb 1, 2010 -
Re: My Haiku
Wow... spasmodic, Random...Why refrigerator?
Feb 1, 2010 -
Re: Break My Heart A Little More
Good poem! I like it's message.. I can't really say anything bad about it. keep writing
Feb 1, 2010