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I thought the story was interesting. I wouldn't necessarily put it in non fiction because I feel like half of it is fiction and the other half is non fiction.I ...

Hey thegilliangill, It Fiction here to review. First of all I have never heard of Martyn Waghorn or the team he plays on. Does this guy play soccer? I thought ...

I think that your diary entry is good. I think that you will get an A. I only have a couple of suggestions... Walking alone, in the wreckage of once ...

Hey Virsanity, It's Fiction903 and I am going to review your poem. I thought that you did an okay job but I do have a couple of suggestions. My corrections ...

Hey Kingolions, I think that this poem is okay. I have noticed a recurring theme in your poems. Most of the poems are about the main character wishing to be ...

I think that this is a good poem. I would also think that you should make the lines longer because it would make it less choppy.I think alot of what ...

Hello there, It's Fiction here for your review. I think people already covered all the grammatical errors so I will just give you my opinion. At first I thought it ...

like your poem. Having alot of personal experiences with alcoholics,I think you did a good job describing the typical night. Especially Words spew out. Another free throw, I don't really ...

Welcome to YWS Rain.I'm fiction903 here to review the poem. It is not bad for your first poem. It was actually okay. I do notice some things that you can ...

I like this fast paced story. I think it had vivid descriptions and I could clearly recognize the narrators voice thru the entire thing. Please don't forget simple capitalization and ...

I think that you did a wonderful job with this piece of non fiction. Have you ever heard the saying, no good deed goes unpunished? I think that was what ...

I like this poem alot. Look into the eyes of innocence, Staring down the barrel of the gun. Fear and hunger in every tear, personally these are my two favorite ...

I thought that this was an interesting poem. I'm with a friend from my imagination, he knows what I mean when I say 'the world in between the tree and ...

I will be honest with you I didn't really like this short story. New school, new year, new student of the new year at the new school. A fresh start. ...

I like this. It is really good considering that you wrote it at four in the morning. I think it has a well rounded beginning, middle, and end. I thought ...