felistia

Thank you so much for the review. I will be sure to go back and edit and tweak the narrating a bit. This was my first narrative story ever, so ...

Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it. :D

Thanks for the review. I have reason for all the guards being asleep or gone, but you'll have to wait and see why. :D

oh no. I was just checking if a button worked. :D

thank you so much for the review. I would love it if you could go back and read the rest of my novel. :D P.S I'm currently reviewing a chapter ...

thanks for the review. :D

thanks for the review. I've fixed the mistakes. sorry I scared you. :D

thanks for the review. :D

thanks for the review. :D

Thanks for the review. :D

Thank you so much for more reviews. I am happy to now that my writing has gotten better. I've gone back and fixed the chapter's you reviewed and I hope ...

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No problem. I don't really have any comments on how to make the poem longer though. P.S would you like to join in a writing competition? :D

Sure. I'll have a look. :D

Thanks for the great reviews. I'll go and fix the chapter right away. I'm really glad that you think I've improved. :D