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Re: Frost and Flame - Chapter 2(uneven odds)
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D P.S sorry for the short review, but I really enjoyed this chapter and couldn't find much wrong ...
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Re: Night and Day
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks The skylight skates across the sky as it surfaces. My only complaint for this poem really ...
Aug 6, 2016 -
Re: Clean Palette
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks And there is cleaning to do This line didn't sit well with me and sort of ...
Aug 4, 2016 -
Re: Frost and Flame -chapter 2
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks "You know, that's not the purpose I intended for that knife when I gave it to ...
Aug 4, 2016 -
Re: Dumb Flu - Story and Video
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D A quick note before I start: I've never reviewed a script before so I'm sorry in advance ...
Aug 4, 2016 -
Re: dive
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Overall thoughts Theme: I really liked the well delivered and yet simple theme of this poem. I've ...
Aug 3, 2016 -
Re: Frost and Flame
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks Ariel was not a beast of the field, neither was she a bird, or a man ...
Aug 3, 2016 -
Re: Bright eyes chapter two
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks It was hard to just stand outside her window and watch her sob. But I couldn't ...
Aug 3, 2016 -
Re: Sleep
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D First off, I'd like to welcome you to the site. I hope you enjoy your stay at ...
Aug 2, 2016 -
Re: The Unicorn
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks I think it is because he knows what animal I ride, though he does not quite ...
Aug 2, 2016 -
Re: Dresses and Politics Part 2: Chapter 6
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks It takes her awhile, but eventually she calms down and relaxes. We chat as if we ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: Dresses and Politics Part 3: Chapter 5
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks “Please call me Grace .” What is wrong with me? I’m never this happy or giddy. ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: I didn't know- NaNoWriMo project 2015 - Chapter 7
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks After work on Monday on her way home she stopped by the library to borrow a ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: I didn't know- NaNoWriMo project 2015 - Chapter 6
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks She checked the screen to see who was calling and answered cheerfully. “Hey brother dear!” “Hello ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: Dresses and Politics Part 3: Chapter 4
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks They look at each other, then slowly approach me. I roll off to the left. I ...
Jul 31, 2016
