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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Frost and Flame - Chapter 2(uneven odds)

    Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D P.S sorry for the short review, but I really enjoyed this chapter and couldn't find much wrong ...

    Aug 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Night and Day

    Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks The skylight skates across the sky as it surfaces. My only complaint for this poem really ...

    Aug 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Clean Palette

    Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks And there is cleaning to do This line didn't sit well with me and sort of ...

    Aug 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Frost and Flame -chapter 2

    Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks "You know, that's not the purpose I intended for that knife when I gave it to ...

    Aug 4, 2016
  • Script » Film, Humor Re: Dumb Flu - Story and Video

    Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D A quick note before I start: I've never reviewed a script before so I'm sorry in advance ...

    Aug 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: dive

    Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Overall thoughts Theme: I really liked the well delivered and yet simple theme of this poem. I've ...

    Aug 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: Frost and Flame

    Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks Ariel was not a beast of the field, neither was she a bird, or a man ...

    Aug 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Bright eyes chapter two

    Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks It was hard to just stand outside her window and watch her sob. But I couldn't ...

    Aug 3, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sleep

    Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D First off, I'd like to welcome you to the site. I hope you enjoy your stay at ...

    Aug 2, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Unicorn

    Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks I think it is because he knows what animal I ride, though he does not quite ...

    Aug 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Dresses and Politics Part 2: Chapter 6

    Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks It takes her awhile, but eventually she calms down and relaxes. We chat as if we ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Dresses and Politics Part 3: Chapter 5

    Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks “Please call me Grace .” What is wrong with me? I’m never this happy or giddy. ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: I didn't know- NaNoWriMo project 2015 - Chapter 7

    Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks After work on Monday on her way home she stopped by the library to borrow a ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: I didn't know- NaNoWriMo project 2015 - Chapter 6

    Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks She checked the screen to see who was calling and answered cheerfully. “Hey brother dear!” “Hello ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Dresses and Politics Part 3: Chapter 4

    Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks They look at each other, then slowly approach me. I roll off to the left. I ...

    Jul 31, 2016


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