You're new huh? so welcome to YWS. Well you're new but older than me so anyway I'm gonna review. Your poem had meaning in it but it lacked a rhyme. I know that there are rhyming words but IDK if it's my mood or your poem but it kinda felt plain to me.
"For your dreams will be your candle light
The light that guides you through your sleep"
The word 'light' again seems a bit weird there. Using some other synonyms of light would be advisable. Rather that describing 'sleep' u described a 'friend' in sleep or is 'sleep' the 'friend'? Okay forget I even said that. Anyway good poem keep up the good work. If you can check out some of my works and review.
bye
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