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Re: 1
Hi Ehtaniel, Felistia here with a short review on your very long chapter. First a few suggestions. Okay so the first sentence is good, (Her blonde hair in the wind,) ...
Dec 16, 2015 -
Re: New Haven: Chapter 5: What Lay Behind The Doors
Hi MadWriter7, Felistia here with another review on your novel. Story: The story is going along quite nicely and you put in something nice to read in every chapter so ...
Dec 16, 2015 -
Re: Feather Dragon
Hi HolographicLadybug, Felistia here with a review. I really love this poem and the subject, but I think that was a bit predictable being me. :D For some reason I ...
Dec 16, 2015 -
Re: New Haven: Chapter 4: A Lot of Introductions (To Eloise's Horror)
Hi MadWriter7, Felistia here with a short review on your story. Story: I'm not entirely sure what the plot of the story is yet, but I guess it is going ...
Dec 16, 2015 -
Re: New Haven: Chapter 3: Ellington Academy
Hi MadWriter7, Felistia here with the review you requested. This chapter is definitely better than your last try. As in the prologue your description is excellent and really helps move ...
Dec 15, 2015 -
Re: New Haven: Chapter 1: Waves
Hi MadWriter7, Felistia here with the review you requested. Wow, this is a much better way to start the story. It is so full of emotions and the description is ...
Dec 15, 2015 -
Re: New Haven: Chapter 2: The Train of Memories
Hi MadWriter7, Felistia here with the review you requested. I must just say that you are an excellent story writer. You have the perfect balance between description and dialogue and ...
Dec 12, 2015 -
Re: Holiday Waves
Hi penfeme, Felistia here with the review you requested. I will start with the bad and work my way to the good. So first nit-pick would be the last line ...
Dec 12, 2015 -
Re: Wrath to Plight
Hi Abhipsa, Felistia here with a review on your poem. Just as a side note this poem really reminds me of one I wrote called the Ship and Storm. Yours ...
Dec 10, 2015 -
Re: Dragon Keeper Chapter 3
Hi dogsrule5, Felistia here with the review you requested. Warning: This review may seem to be a bit mean. I don't mean it in this way, I am trying to ...
Dec 9, 2015 -
Re: Like the Back of My Hand
Hi rubykae, Felistia here with a review on your poem. I really like that you made a hand so pretty, it is quite a original poem in my eyes. You ...
Dec 8, 2015 -
Re: A Day At The Beach
Hi jessiebear, Felistia here with a short review on your piece. Firstly I like this piece better than your last works. Your description is getting better but there are some ...
Dec 7, 2015 -
Re: Appreciating Life
Hi ABHISHIKA, Felistia here with a short review on your poem. I really like this poem. It is a very interesting read and flows really well. The punctuation is perfect ...
Dec 6, 2015 -
Re: when i grow up
Hi ElephantGirl1, Felistia here with a short review on your poem. Firstly welcome to YWS, I hope you like it here. Now on with the review. Firstly I love the ...
Dec 6, 2015 -
Re: 6 December
Hi Eros, Felistia here with a short review on your poem. I really liked the concept in this poem, it has a really sad, but romantic feeling to it. Your ...
Dec 6, 2015