felistia

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks I miss him and I want him to come. I hate him and never want to ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks "Dad! I'm not a little girl anymore! I don’t need you to sugar coat the situation. ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks As Jason was turning around to leave the scene before any teachers got there, a blur ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks I spotted at least four other dragons besides Skyra, two unicorns, and a countless number of ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks He jumped from his chair and locked his door then rested his weight against it. The ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks lazy-i-dont-give-a-shit-if-you-drink-my-blood Okay so I thought the swearing was really unnecessary and you could have gotte

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks Magazines and syringes were scattered across it, I wonder what the syringes are for? They’d snigger ...

Okay so I can't really find anything to change in this poem. It's really funny and I didn't see the end coming. The only mistake I found was this The ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks Okay so the only real nit-pick that I have is that I can't figure out if ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks I think that the dream sequence should be in italics. It will let the reader know ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks My heels will bring a lot more attention to me so I take them off and ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks He starts to turn and attack, while reaching for his sword, but I punch him in ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks My dad said fear Okay so first off there should be a comma between "said" and ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks Her halo is made of white gold How rich are these people? Grammar and Punctuation I ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks “Yeah, she died four years ago. She had just had my baby sister Elizabeth and was ...