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  • Short Story » Realistic, Review Re: Phone Problems

    hi there! It is really difficult to write a story in just a few lines so I appreciate your writing skills. Social media is such a mess sometimes. Your story ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: For every 'yes' your heart says ,there comes a 'no' from your brain

    Hi Niteesh! I loved the concept of your piece of work. yes! there are always two people living inside you, giving you two different advises. This is actually a bit ...

    Apr 4, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Genetic Modification

    Hi, there When I first started reading your story and imagined a person waiting for his reports, I thought it was an another "FAULT IN OUR STARS" inspired story where ...

    Mar 31, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: maroon

    hi there, When I first came across this poem, I thought it must be another piece of fantasy writing or about Christmas celebration but it was totally different. I loved ...

    Dec 24, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: A Guilty Father

    Hi Mialynire, I just went through your story and i found it beautifully written.The title of your story is catchy. You have kept it short and simple. However, I felt ...

    Dec 3, 2016
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Worst 18th Birthday Ever???

    Hi there, Your piece of work is good and the starting of the story is catchy and that’s the plus point of your work. But it could have been more ...

    Nov 29, 2016


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