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  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense Re: Chapter 1: A Truck and a Bar

    hello- just dropping by to leave a quick review : ) Alright, it looks like we have here the first chapter in a novel about some demons living in hell. ...

    Feb 28
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: Rockferry, Chapter 1

    hello there- just dropping in to leave a review : ) What I enjoyed: Throughout the story, the descriptions and scenery are written very well. You get a sense of ...

    Feb 27
  • Short Story » Other, Realistic Re: Power Struggle

    hey there, just dropping by for a quick review- or at least that's what I always open this, but this is a long read so it might not be so ...

    Nov 4, 2024
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Edge of Humanity

    hey there, just dropping by for a quick review. this story is a science-fiction piece about two friends saying goodbye as one of them leaves to start a new life ...

    Aug 8, 2024
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Laziness has no reward

    hi there, i'm just dropping by for a quick review this story is a one about laziness and how it can affect your life. in the story, the main character ...

    Aug 8, 2024
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Screaming and Singing

    good evening- or whatever time it is when you have a chance to read this; i'm just here to drop by for a quick review. :-) this short story seems ...

    Aug 8, 2024
  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: A letter for someone who used to be different.

    helloo friend, i legit just hopped on here to make some quirky status post after writing an analysis of Titus Andronicus, but the title of this short story caught my ...

    Jul 7, 2024
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Amongst the Robins and the Rivers

    hey there, dropping by for a quick review. this is exciting, I don't think I've read anything of yours that wasn't poetry! Like @HildeMint said, this story also reminded me ...

    Jul 2, 2024
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Goodbye forever, Never Mine - part II

    hey there, i'm just dropping by for a quick review. To start out, I'm just going to say that I didn't read part I. I was like halfway through reading ...

    Jun 27, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: 12 days of poetry (2023 edition)

    hey there! just dropping by for a quick review : ) first off, i really enjoy the concept of this. it looks lie you decided to write twelve poems in ...

    Jun 1, 2024
  • Short Story » Humor, Romantic Re: Train (A short inspired oneshot)

    hey there, I'm just dropping by for a quick review : ) First off, I really liked this story. I thought it was endearing and I thought that the interactions ...

    May 7, 2024
  • Art » Lyrical, General Re: An' When Our Wars Break Out With A Big Boom, Our Spring Flowers Will Still Bloom

    Hey there, just wanted to drop by to leave a comment about this artwork. First of all, wow! this is so pretty and cool! I love the frame that you ...

    Mar 30, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: To break the curse

    Hey there, I'm just dropping by for a quick review: I've seen you posting a lot of different stories on YWS, but I have never had the chance to read ...

    Mar 30, 2024
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: The Bear’s Rock

    hey there ! first off, welcome to YWS. i know you only just joined today, but I hope you are enjoying the site so far. it's a great community that ...

    Mar 30, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I Am An Optimistic Atheist

    hey there, just thought i'd drop by for a quick review. i was really drawn to this poem from the title, so great job there. the poem, to me at ...

    Mar 30, 2024


I would like to be the air that inhabits you for a moment only. I would like to be that unnoticed and that necessary.
— Margaret Atwood