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  • Poetry » Fanfiction, General Re: Dear John

    Hi! Cute poem you have here. It's very creative. I really, really like the rhymes. And the meaning is very....touching. Good job. I also like how it's short, sweet, and ...

    Aug 5, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Daddy's Angel

    Also, welcome to YWS. You will really enjoy it here. If you have any questions, feel free to ask me. PM me if you like. I would be more than ...

    Aug 3, 2015
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: To Wander on a Cloud

    You're welcome. If you really want you, we can be writing buddies. PM me and let me know what you think! :D

    Aug 1, 2015
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: To Wander on a Cloud

    Hello! I really liked your story here. The descriptions were wonderful and handled with great care. It was also very well-written, and I liked how it was short, sweet, and ...

    Jul 31, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Dark Crystal Part 12

    Thank you very, very much. :)

    Jul 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Time Haikus

    Oh, thank you. I find haikus pretty interesting.

    Jul 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Time Haikus

    Hi! I have never really heard of a haiku (what is a haiku, actually?). But they are really, really good. It tells about time and what it does. I agree ...

    Jul 28, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Culture, Realistic Re: How to Be a Lady

    I agree with you very, very much. My writing tends to be a bit sloppy at times. I thought that I should write about how to be a lady. Thank ...

    Jul 28, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Culture, Realistic Re: How to Be a Lady

    Thank you very much. I apologize if I said anything that you didn't like. I felt as if I should write about being ladies. I think it is very important ...

    Jul 28, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Dark Crystal Part 12

    Thank you for the feedback. I really love to write, but I seem to struggle with the "show don't tell". Any advice you could give me about that? It would ...

    Jul 28, 2015
  • Article / Essay » General, Satire Re: My Question To The Pseudo-Feminists

    I do agree with you Sara.

    Jul 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: beauty: the boy and the girl

    Hello. I really like this poem. It was very sweet. I don't really have much to say. Good job!!! Keep writing!!!!! Bye!

    Jul 27, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Fantasy Re: Wings

    You're welcome. Thank you for following me. *follows back*

    Jul 27, 2015
  • Article / Essay » General, Satire Re: My Question To The Pseudo-Feminists

    I think feminism is a subject that arouses arguments. People have different opinions. Someone might say this and someone might say something contrary to the other person's opinions. The first ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Dark Crystal Part 1

    Thank you for the review.

    Jul 26, 2015


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