fallenoutofgrace

Happy review day! Fallen here to review this spe ial poem!!!! Let's get started (sorry for typos) first off I like the edge this poems hold as if to say ...

Alright let's make this annunced (*waves*hey is fallen here to review excuse themispellings) Don't write i n text ever. Spell out the words by using text it brings the quality ...

Hi its fallen here to review your unique poem. Let's get started first since t is the only mistake I see when you wrote "relize frozen" (excuse the spelling errors" ...

Hi fallen here to review ya. First off I love how you set your chapter up. I like how you explain everything and uses imagery from the thought of kaj ...

So far I like the chapter and what you did. I really like how you did the quote above to start it I thought I worked well. I also like ...

Really great imagery. I really enjoyed the subtle details of the thy's it helps paints a picture of the olden days where people faced their enemies. Your imagery is really ...

First off a very good practice to do. Also completely agree with you with the " My chemical romance" the world is a very dark place now. I love your ...

Fire! I liked this a lot it was really nice and awesome. I loved your imagery as you gave the clues and how it was just beautiful to read. My ...

Okay so first off * looks behind me,* phew alright there not after me. Second I liked how you started off with the song/ I don't even know what that ...

First off, I commend you for writing of your friend. And I'm sorry of your loosed. So lets get started. I liked how you started with Dear angel, as if ...

First off OMG I LOVE YOUR IDEA!!! I loved how you explain and described all the questions the reader has throughout the chapter. I also liked how this reminded me ...

First off I was a little bit confused during the beginning cause I couldn't remember who was who. Beside that your banter between the two were just great for instance, ...

This story just keeps getting better and better! I love your imagery on the attack how they literally had a whole in her arm. Also I feel that with the ...

First off although this is not your typical hykui since all lines are 7 symbols not the 5-7-5 symbol rule it doesn't matter as much depending on the person you ...

Fallen the awesome here to review tonight. First off I love your word choice and the flow of your poem I enjoyed it a lot. Amazing imagery and describing everything. ...