fallenoutofgrace

Sorry but putting this out right now. This is not a review I will not be critiquing you what so ever. Simply commenting alright. Your picture along with the poem ...

gonna say this. I apologize but I need to let out my excitement before im ay continue alright * breaths* HOLY FRABBER GZZLE NUTS AND SHOES! I love love love ...

Hey buddy thanks for this interesting story. Now for the nitpicks which are few are during the beginging where you wrote the feared for the boy, I don't know if ...

Aright starting this out a bunch of people would find your lack of punctuation to ruin the flow and make this poem meaningless, I on the other hand LOVE this. ...

Hi there this is Fallen here time for a review. First off I love your imagery. Its like the reader is your characters living through there thoughts, feelings, regrets. Truly ...

Ello buddy! Here to review a few things with you. So first off, I LOVE pokemon and find this partcular fanfic to be intresting. It brings a lot if appeal ...

I enjoyed this and this style. For being your first try you pretty much nailed it! your nailed how a teenager acts when trying to ask a person they have ...

First off I need to do one thing. Hahahaha! i'm sorry but when the two are surprised it looks like the most corniest cartoon where your groaning like " come ...

Really having a hard time not jumping up clapping Bravo Bravo. But all try so lets start with your diction it aids in the mood staring off airy and almost ...

Honestly, i don't know what to say. You literally made me speechless. In a good way don't get me wrong, the speakers emotion caused me to read over their thoughts ...

Hi this is fallen here come to review for you. So without addressing any grammatical error which are few and just looking at the meaning of the poem you written ...

Hi i'm fallen here to review. First off when i saw the title i thought this isn't going to end well in the grammar department but after reading the description, ...

Hi I'm fallen from the team the mystery machine coming to review your artwork so lets get started. I really like your red hawk i think your lines and shading ...

Hi this is fallen here coming to review. So first on things i liked about your work. I liked how you explained and described the story of the dragon and ...

Alright first impression best creepy pasta story ever. Second impression you did and amazing job; the challenge with no e's sounded like a challenge but you made this challenge be ...