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Actully i thought the structure in this piece was great. You have to understand this was all leading up to the conclusion about forgetting how to dream and that basically ...

I thought that this piece was awesome. A hint it could easily be read from the bottom up to change, no well not change but to recreate the meaning while ...

Conceit pulled of eloquently. Wow. I never thought I would see something like that. I don't touch grammer or style only the message behind a poem and clearly the message ...

Nice concept. Well written and very heart felt. The only problem I have with this is how you organized it. I'm not sure that this was the right way to ...

Dating something isn't always a bad thing 1984 was dated and it's still around today. So this was a very well done piece of writing you showed us instead of ...

this is a very good poem. I'm glad you took the repition out. this poem was great in the fact that almost everyone does remember feeling like that at one ...

This was well written and all which is great but I also think I see the reason you're teacher gave you a low grade. I'm betting the teacher said this ...

Well there could be such a thing as a good bye to writting I just hope it's a myth.This poem was wonderfully funny and witty(witty is an odd word) it ...

I thought that the path you ment. in this poem was one of going into adulthood. Childhood ignoranceis one of the most amazing things in the world. The whole of ...

As a fan im not only allowed to laugh I am encouraged to this is really funny and had some very good points made about the show. Misa did always ...

I got this poem as either a pregnancy or she had cancer one of the two that I saw. First of i don't critieque style or grammar only the message ...

okay so i think i actully caught what he shifted into although it is rather vague and rather throughly out of reach.He shifted into a human. if thats the cas ...

So I am not an outlaw. I loved your essay and the idea behind your questions is a very well put one indeed. So like i said im not an ...

I never touch grammar or style. That being said, wow! This was trully great a masterpiece and i mean that with all my heart the story told was amazing and ...

so let me first state that this was amazing. second that i do not crit. grammar or style only message. I would try to give you an answer as they ...