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Re: Counting Sheep
You get ittt. I was just editing the grammar when i realized the symbolism of a semicolon and scrambled to add it somewhere. Thanks a lot for your review
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Re: Bougainvillea
Check my reply to goodolnoah's review, and you'll understand why I wrote what I wrote. Thanks for the review
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Re: Revenge - best served cold
I'm certain your writing will improve more if this is your first work in this genre. Most of us go in knowing nothing, but the point is to go out ...
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Re: Morning In America
Because even her laughing in the theater or after her daughter's death isn't a bodily reaction, even to trauma. There's something being done to her, and i wouldn't put it ...
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Re: Raisa Accardi, such a sweet little thing
Goddamn! you've been busy, fs. Would love to check them out sometime!
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Re: Sweet Girl
Aww, this is very nice. Feelings are to be cherished, if not relived, and love, no matter how fleeting it is, is worth remembrance. I enjoy your comments, and any ...
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Re: Sweet Girl
Thanks for the review! This story is basically about a woman who had miscarried a girl child, and is basically reminiscing about a life she could have had. I used ...
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Re: Raisa Accardi, such a sweet little thing
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May 31, 2025
Hey, I'll be reviewing your work today! wanted to start off by saying that I'm not very familiar with the backstory other than the short intro you wrote, but I'm ... - Re: and the bluejays played in the grass May 9, 2025
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Re: Bougainvillea
Thanks so much
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Re: A God Named Sin Prologue
Is it shadow and bone? or maybe the wheel of time??
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