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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: καλοκαίρι

    Thank you kindly for the reviews. It may help to realize that καλοκαίρι is Greek for summer.

    Nov 29, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: At Last

    I suppose its easier to understand if you have played the sport.

    Nov 16, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: mistakes

    This belongs to some horrible facebook note to all of your friends. There are thousands of them, all saying the same meaningless thing. "You are the all-seeing all-dancing crap of ...

    Nov 13, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Rain by-amber rose (me)

    cute

    Nov 13, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: καλοκαίρι

    thank you

    Nov 12, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: hurt

    Good lord thats awful. Just the worst. Wait, perhaps its just a great satire on some of the terrible poetry on this site, lord I hope so because if not... ...

    Nov 10, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Preps are bad for your sole?

    Please friend this is not a forum to post your angst against the oppressive popular kids. Well at least not so blatantly.

    Nov 10, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Poetry Fight

    An excellent little ditty. Everything flowed smoothly and reminded me of "Everything you can do, I can do better."

    Nov 8, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: What to write

    This is not a review but why would you put this in public

    Oct 31, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: lunar wombs

    I am humbled by these reviews.

    Oct 30, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: lunar wombs

    I do not deserve that high praise my friend.

    Oct 29, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: An Absence

    Don't listen to the swine above, keep the format. This is a great blend of Prose writing and pure poetic journalism. It's great and keep it that way.

    Oct 27, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: An Absence

    Prose at its best my friend. A testament to the zeitgeist of any story worth telling. A scorching sensational piece, but i feel as though its just the beginning to ...

    Oct 21, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Seeming Void

    Well, my friend, the part with the rope was a rather weak allegory i thought of when i tried to describe our human agricultural society. There is only technically togetherness ...

    Oct 21, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Lion is a Communist(other side of morning)

    thanks for the reviews everyone

    Oct 21, 2008


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