Published November 10, 2008
He hur t me so bad when he lied to me once again he told me we be together forever that was butch of bull crap and he told me we would get married ater i graduate but he lied Why did he lie to me so much for .I loved him with all my heart and soul and what does he do he cheats and lies to me. I didn't get my fantasy of a happliy ever after instead i got a heart that is broken and i keep bleading love over and over again . so He made me learn to love and that I thank him for but he made me fall into tiny pieces and that I don't thank him for . But I really feel toren into pieces and I don't know how to fix this feeeling .
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Good lord thats awful. Just the worst.
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