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Re: Corn
Heyo, AceofPayds! Lupa here with a RevMo review! :D Let's get started. 1) I come to realize While the crow flies With it's dreary eyes That I am what every ...
Sep 7, 2017 -
Re: Mixing Magic [Draft 2]: Chapter 12.2
Hey, Mea! Lupa here for a RevMo review! :D Let's get right into it. 1) The sleek-furred leader created the portal, and the wagon trundled through. Sound stopped, nothingness enclosed ...
Sep 3, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 1-Cry Baby
Hey, graphiteshimmer! Lupa here for a RevMo review. :) Let's get to it. 1) This is a pretty powerful message, but it's been done plenty of times. There's actually a ...
Sep 2, 2017 -
Re: Orange Asiatic Lilies pt. 1
Heya, rosette! Lupa here for a RevMo review. :) Let's begin! 1) "It's not?" Aunt Laurie's voice held a touch of hopelessness. Based on what I've seen in the rest ...
Sep 2, 2017 -
Re: Distorted
Hey, CrazyGirl! Lupa here for a RevMo review. :) Let's get staaaaarted! 1) Not in any tangible way no, I mean not the distorted you see in a Picasso painting ...
Sep 1, 2017 -
Re: Mixing Magic [Draft 2]: Chapter 11.2
Heyo, Mea! Lupa here for a Review Day review! :D Let's begin. 1) Ayda closed her eyes, relief washing through her. This would work. It had to. She sprang up, ...
Aug 27, 2017 -
Re: Smiles That Scream
Hey, RavenLord! Lupa here for a review! :D Let's begin. 1) I didn't say anything because I was young and didn't know what that really meant. I think I understand ...
Aug 13, 2017 -
Re: Your Heart
Hi, EmPanda15! Lupa here for a review! :D Let's get crackin'. 1) You start off with a nature theme, which is good. Nature is a beautiful thing, and there's nothing ...
Aug 2, 2017 -
Re: Liz + Zac (Epilogue)
Hey, Carlito! Lupa here to answer your questions! And your book was so good, I couldn't stop reading it. :D No problem at all. 1) Thoughts on Liz. I agree ...
Jul 30, 2017 -
Re: Liz + Zac (16.2)
Hey, Carlito! Lupa here for a review! :D Let's start. 1) “It’s okay, I wasn’t doing anything,” I tell the piano. I think I get what you're trying to say ...
Jul 16, 2017 -
Re: Mixing Magic [Draft 2]: Chapter 4.2
Hey, Mea! Lupa here for a review! :D Let's begin. 1) The air was heavy and treelike, I'm not quite sure how air can be "tree-like." Does it smell like ...
Jul 16, 2017 -
Re: Runaway - Chapter Two
Hey, deliroast! Lupa here for a review from Team Blue Jays! :D Let's begin. I'd like to start with what I liked. You do a great job of showing the ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Liz + Zac (16.1)
Heya, Carlito! Lupa here from Team Blue Jays, doing a Review Day review! :D Let's begin. 1) It feels like Cherry's mood changes dramatically from the first line to the ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Liz + Zac (15.0)
Carlito! It's Lupa again for a review. Let's jump right in. :D 1) The first section is just Liz mourning, right? I mean, she's mourning for basically all of her ...
Jun 22, 2017 -
Re: Liz + Zac (13.1)
Hey, Carlito! Lupa here for a review. Let's go! :D 1) "Romeo gave Zac the spare key last night so we’re free to come and go as we please," This ...
Jun 21, 2017