endless_secrets

Thanks Winie! You guys are great! I can't belive you like it and feel the emotion even withought having the read book 1! :)

Thank you Kyllorac for yet another helpful crit, I remember you from I posted the beginning of another novel June, which is still in the works by the way. 38 ...

Thanks Dudette, you were a lot of help actually and thanks for the ego boost! I will be posting the edits shortly and hopefully part three soon after. It hard ...

Meadowlark! I didn't see you there! Thanks for your review, i will add more desciption and fix it up according to your suggestions. I was in a rush and when ...

Rubin Thank you for your review, I will try to add alittle more description because unfortunately i am know for bridging, i really just can't wait to get to the ...

Thank you Ofir!! You just made my day, its far from being at its best but i'm glad you liked it! Of course I'll PM you when the next piece ...

Springrain Why didn't I think of that *nervous laugh* Will do!

Thank you Sunshire, Kara and Kyla! You are right about her speaking to formally, I just finished writing a novel where one character has this thing about speaking formally all ...

Thank you Meadow and Kyllorak for your reviews, I have edited out most of the long sentences and few other things according to your suggestions and will be posting the ...

Hey Lindsey Thanks so much for the review! I will definately fix up those little errors you found and you are completely right about my lack of sensory description. i'll ...

Angel of Death Fantasality eh? I've never heard that one before, i like it! And thank for your great review, if you decide to read more i hope you will ...

hey everyone! thanks for all your reviews, i will be posting an edited copy of this within the next few hours and i would love your input when i am ...

Also just so everyone knows i will be posting an edited version within the next few hours, no huge changes, just editing, and adding little things here and there. i ...

Just so everyone knows i am posting an edited version of all that i have written within the next few hours, so feel free to comment on it when i ...

Firestalker Thanks for the review! I definately need to watch out for the present tense sneaking its way in there... i am going to fix that and add in more ...