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I really like how Eyes bright red. rhymes with So easily led. and then nothing else rhymes. I sort of sets up an expectation and then tears it down. I ...

I thought this was really beautiful. I think what I like most about it is how... adult it sounded. Sometimes when teenagers write poetry, no matter the language they use ...

Hello, I just wanted to say that I read your other poem and from what I've read I really like your writing style. You convey ideas and images simply and ...

Okay this is my third attempt at writing a review so forgive me if this is super brief but my computer is maddening. But what I'm trying to say is ...

I don't know if it is fitting to review a review, but that was really beautiful. It doesn't matter that I disagree with it almost 100%, did not cry at ...

Hello Todd, First off, let me say that this is a pretty solid story. I only review things that I like in the first place, and this is the first ...

First of all, I love the title. Rarely ever does a title absolutely strike me as something I must read, but this did. Just for the hell of it, I ...

Let me first say that this is a beautiful poem. And I think your point here was to creative something whimsical, which you very much succeeded in doing. However, I ...

Hey tanja! It's me. I just wanted to say, good job for finally getting something up. And I enjoyed reading it, though I hate carnivals and I cant see your ...

I remember this story. How could I forget? My one friend who's fond of action and dialogue and not the passages of purple-prosed narration. I definitely felt the pace slow ...

Hello, Pudin. Long time since I've read anything of yours, so sorry. Well, this is a completely different piece than your other novel-- I like it more, so far. I ...

that was really beautiful, fixed. Carried to the hilltop, the tulip growing weak, held in coarse hands, twirled in cold night. random nitpick, but I'd rather the tulip part be ...

Hello, I really enjoyed your poem. i thought it was silly and whimsical, and though the rhyming scheme is utterly forced I think that's all right, here. I can actually ...

I think cheesy found an accidental rhyme, because I certainly didn't see it. You struck me, screaming goodbyes. I actually really liked this line; and as always, I'm out of ...

If I counted all your lies, I would be surprised if you told even some truths. Soothsayer. You ? I don't like the = sign I just want to know ...