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I kind of agree with Snoink here :? It sounds like a good idea but everyone and their half-brother has tried to publish essays about their day, memoirs on their ...

I really liked this piece. It was brutal, but uplifting at the end. I personally don't think blood was ovverused. It didn't seem like too much to me. Blood that ...

you practice piano, each note rising disturbed from the gut of the instrument like birds from the underbrush. your body weaves, concentrated, your chest flat and breastless in that dress. ...

I've read this maybe three or four times but, as it's wonderful, I didn't know what to say. And I hate to be the person who posts four-word comments like ...

I agree with the person above-- kind of short; and if you do expand this into a story, I'll be interested to hear what happens. I'm a suker for makeover ...

hmm. Seventh was my least favorite. Eight was my favorite, both drivers ed ones were enjoyable. The first one was great as well. And it's cool that you tried out ...

the sun cracking the earth like an interrogator. This didn't really work for me. I suppose an interrogator cracks questions at people, but so many other things crack or our ...

I've read this and two of your poems and this is what I have to say: your purpose on this earth is to torment us all with your beautiful work. ...

I'm not totally sure, but I'm thinking it might be better as "How much do you love me?" "Enough," he said. "to stay." "How long will you stay?" He stayed ...

Quotes are odd. As you can read from the signatures on this site, everyone has their own taste in what is essentially free wisdom. Whether you agree with the advice ...

I really enjoyed this. You do need a lot more punctuation sprinkled about in your piece; but I loved the idea and the content. They will hide their emotions of ...

I agree with Kryollac about the rhyming scheme; but that's pretty much how I rhyme and I kind of like it. It goes with the theme of the poem; being ...

This was magnificent, Becki! Can I call you Becki? I loved the use of second person; it was well-executed, so say the least. And the emotions evoked were very powerful. ...

First of all, welcome! And you may want to put an eye-catching title on your piece, and put that it's your first post in the body of the work. Anyways, ...

I thought it was fast-paced, light in a dark sort of way and fun in a devious manner. I don't think it leaves too much to question-- he is planning ...