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That was great. You really captured all the "little" things, which made it very realistic.

"now her tears fall unnoticed " The unnoticed was kind of weird.. I don't know, it didn't seem necessary to me. The poem was really nicely written and I liked ...

Yeah... it was dripping in sarcasm, the whole thing. I don't know if anyone caught that... Thanks for the comments, anyway.

"I'm afraid. " "I stuggle." "i cry loudly " "i manage to get away." These four lines seemed very blunt to me. I suggest finding better words to replace the ...

I think this is more of a narrative poem. The format was a little weird and some of the lines were choppy. It was okay, besides that.

I didn't really like the way the lines were broken up. It made the poem kind of choppy. The poem itself was okay, but the flow definitely needs some work.

Like your poems...wow... Really awesome.

"Him and I have had this conversation " Shouldn't it be "he and I"? Or am I missing some big point you're trying to make there? I liked it, but ...

This was kind of long, so I skimmed over some parts of it. I like how you kept bringing up certain points in the poem, but some of them kind ...

There isn't much to say... in case you want to hear it again... good job.

Haha nice, Snoink!

There were a few spelling errors, but the poem itself was kind of... tranquil? It was a nice read.

I love the words you use in your poems... basically, I love your style of writing. Nice job, again!

I really liked this poem. It's so uniquely written. There were some really long lines that were randomly there, so maybe you could break it up. That's about all I ...

This was really beautiful. Except I have question, which might make me look dumb because the answer is probably obvious... why is it called "three"? Or do you not count ...