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Hey Thorn, here to review this for you. Grammar and spelling: ‘I could have had brad Pitt, or a really cool guitarist or a secret agent or something’ ‘brad’ needs ...

Hey Silver, here’s your review: Spelling and Grammar: ‘Most nights we didn’t have a hot meal on the table, or shoes that fit, or enough heat in the cardboard cutout ...

Hey Ninja Just a quick review... One word; wow. That was awesome, thought your words don't sometimes completely rhyme, there was a really nice flow about it. Your imagery was ...

Hey ShadowVyper! Just a quick review! I really enjoyed this poem, it kind of makes parent hood look 'happy' but 'sad' at the same time. You didn't rhyme all the ...

Hey, Em here. I’m just doing to point out the spelling and grammar issues here as I am in need of some points. ‘I woke up to the unfamiliar sound ...

Hey, Em here with the review as requested, Spelling and Grammar, ‘In my minds eye, a valley rolled out before me and a soaring blue sky stretched out over head, ...

Hey, Em here with the review, Spelling and Grammar: ‘He fit this town.’ I think this should be, ‘He fitted this town.’ Or ‘He fits this town.’ It just sounds ...

Hey, Em here with the review as requested, Spelling and Grammar: ‘She doesnt fall for the sweet talking of any man’ ‘doesn’t’ needs and apostrophe: ‘doesn’t’. ’ Her standards are ...

Hey, Em here with the second review, Spelling and Grammar: ‘crying over a body, thats lifeless and now gone.’ ‘thats’ should be ‘that’s’ for ‘that is’. ‘Wondering who this person ...

Hey, I’m here to review this for you. Spelling and Grammar: ‘I mean there was a dead body, godammit.What the hell, a dead body we were going to steal. The ...

Hello, Em here. I’m going to review this for you. Spelling and Gammar: ‘She wipes away her tears and stands straight.(Any sign of weakness and they will not accept her).’ ...

Hello, Em here. I’m going to review this for you. Spelling and Gammar: ‘She wipes away her tears and stands straight.(Any sign of weakness and they will not accept her).’ ...

Em here with the review, sorry this is so late DX Spelling and Grammar: ‘As I logged onto Facebook, Marbles and Lucky, my two golden retrievers puppies, came into my ...

Hey, Em here for the review I promised. Grammar and Spelling: ‘“but not half as good as your pityful little boyfriend."’ ‘but’ should have a capital b since this is ...