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elwarren

  • Lyrics » Realistic, Culture Re: Mr Admissions

    Hiya! Thanks for your review! I've actually just re read it and it's meant to read how you suggested! Thank-you for such a lovely review, and good luck with your ...

    Sep 20, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Humor Re: New York

    Ah wicked! I'm British so our uni is like your college, I think I'd be in my last year of high school if I was in the U.S. :)

    Aug 8, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Humor Re: New York

    Hi! Thanks for your feedback, I was in fact going for a clinical way as I currently study psychology, and taking a module in disorders :) thanks.

    Aug 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Humor Re: New York

    Ah, thank-you so much! Hopefully i'll be able to post more soon! just need to review more so I can have more points to post :P

    Aug 6, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Culture Re: From The Top Rope!

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    I really love this poem, I like the way that you haven't explicitly mentioned that it is about wrestling (I'm guessing it is lol) My favourite line is "His demons ...

    Aug 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Humor Re: New York

    Ah, okay. This piece was much, much longer but it was for my English Literature coursework, so it had to be cut down to under 800 words, and I can't ...

    Aug 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Lies.

    Wow! I really love this poem! Very emotional and raw! My favourite line in this has to be "Dancing with the ugly truth" the only thing I would say is, ...

    Aug 5, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Blind

    I really like this poem! well done! I especially like the computer virus imagery, as for me it conjures up anxiety in the pit of my stomach, like when you ...

    Aug 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Humor Re: New York

    Thank-you so much :D I'l definitely take those comments on board :D

    Aug 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: i wrote this in the middle of the night

    Wow, I really love this poem, very relatable. It really does really does capture the worst parts of not being able to fall asleep. Hence, making the reader feel a ...

    Aug 4, 2015


Russets and tangerine shades of old gold flushing the very outside edge of the senses ... deep shining ochres, burnt umber and parchments of baked earth—reflecting on itself and through itself, filtering the light.
— Guildenstern (Rosencrantz & Guildenstern Are Dead by Tom Stoppard)