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Re: Mr Admissions
Hiya! Thanks for your review! I've actually just re read it and it's meant to read how you suggested! Thank-you for such a lovely review, and good luck with your ...
Sep 20, 2015 -
Re: New York
Ah wicked! I'm British so our uni is like your college, I think I'd be in my last year of high school if I was in the U.S. :)
Aug 8, 2015 -
Re: New York
Hi! Thanks for your feedback, I was in fact going for a clinical way as I currently study psychology, and taking a module in disorders :) thanks.
Aug 7, 2015 -
Re: New York
Ah, thank-you so much! Hopefully i'll be able to post more soon! just need to review more so I can have more points to post :P
Aug 6, 2015 -
Re: From The Top Rope!
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Aug 6, 2015
I really love this poem, I like the way that you haven't explicitly mentioned that it is about wrestling (I'm guessing it is lol) My favourite line is "His demons ... -
Re: New York
Ah, okay. This piece was much, much longer but it was for my English Literature coursework, so it had to be cut down to under 800 words, and I can't ...
Aug 5, 2015 -
Re: Lies.
Wow! I really love this poem! Very emotional and raw! My favourite line in this has to be "Dancing with the ugly truth" the only thing I would say is, ...
Aug 5, 2015 -
Re: Blind
I really like this poem! well done! I especially like the computer virus imagery, as for me it conjures up anxiety in the pit of my stomach, like when you ...
Aug 5, 2015 -
Re: New York
Thank-you so much :D I'l definitely take those comments on board :D
Aug 5, 2015 -
Re: i wrote this in the middle of the night
Wow, I really love this poem, very relatable. It really does really does capture the worst parts of not being able to fall asleep. Hence, making the reader feel a ...
Aug 4, 2015
