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Thanks :)

Thank you :)

Thanks!

Awww thank you!

I wish I could give you a real review, but I can't critique something that's perfect! I loved it and it made me laugh :) Good job!

Sorry, above I meant "serene", not "serence"

Yeah, but I don't want to keep writing it if it's just bad.

I have always tried to put those feelings into words, but never succeeded :). You did, though! My brothers will say how much crap they go through (not saying they ...

Thanks!

Thanks!!

Thanks demib! I posted a comment farther down the page that says I have already written this into a novel...I just have yet to post it :) (the girl, in ...

Okay, so this is just the beginning of my other story The Elf Child redone. I did this story for NaNoWriMo; there is a lot more where this came from, ...

Wow! Thanks FloralTiara and TaylaChase! That is really helpful. It's been a while since I've written anything (or read anything; my library card expired), so I'm really rusty. To say ...