electricbluemonkey

Yeah great...although: Hmm....the poem has an unique rhyming system and is very good, but...I don't know, the last part that says I die, kind of strikes me. I know that ...

I loved it. The rhyming was the best part of it, it flowed really good and the rhyming was good. I could almost say it in song while I was ...

God, I love this poem...AHH! ITS SO GOOD! Ah, I am crying! :shock: That is so good. Love it, really, one of the best ever. Even better than proffesional poemist...err...people ...

Its ok. Not that good, although the part about the evil ferrets trying to take over the world and stuff was pretty cool...hey...I can go somewhere with this. :D J/K ...

That is good, but what is the story about, I must know. And there is also a couple of run on sentences like No more teacher s, no more books, ...

That part was really good. And I just have to say this, ZZAP, how can you go into so much detail?! Its impossible for me! YOU ARE A REALLY GOOD ...

Good! I liked that! Tell that kid that he is onto something! But, what I think is that he can put a little more detail and effort into it and ...

Good thinking, Brian. That was really consistent and very thorough. Me want more! Although I think you rushed it a bit. See if you can come up with a better ...

Props my good man...I mean...your highness king sir... That was a good poem, short but sweet. Very peculiar but although funny, intriguing to my human mind as because I never ...