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First suggestion done :P I'm going to play with words a little before I hack off the last lines and move them, but that also sounds like a really cool ...

So this was the single most entertaining review I've ever gotten on one of my pieces before xD I am soooo glad that you liked it. Braz is SO HARD ...

Thank you so much! :) I'm glad you're enjoying this as much as you are (and I HOPE it's genuine enjoyment xD). I'm going to try to work on Francis ...

Thanks, Deanie! And no, Nicky's not presently romantically involved with anyone. The entire group's just pretty touchy. ;)

Awesome. :) I'll look it over again. Might not review it, but definitely re-read.

Fevers will do that! It was really quite good. :) Good luck with the edits!

Deanie! :D Thank you so much, m'dear. One thing that I would like to say, because I'm getting "I thought he was a girl" a LOT. And this is that ...

Can I just say, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS. I've been trying to explain to people for ages that there is not a difference between a 'bad' word ...

Thank you kindly, dear! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. (: Although, with poetry, I find that capitalization can really mess with the feel of the piece. For something that's ...

Thanks again! The only problem I'm having with imagery is... it's a hospital. I have no idea what to throw in, since most North American hospitals (especially the rooms) are ...

My only response to this, other than a giant thank you: Parker is supposed to be somewhat feminine. It's just his character. :P Effeminate men exist, and he just so ...

The narrator's relationship with the kid is supposed to be vague. ;) It's all contained in one chapter, technically, so you've got lots of time to figure it out. But ...

Thank you very much! There was actually a story behind Brazil's name (and his sisters, for that matter), but I lost what it was. Two years ago. I had it ...

Part two. Woah. Well, that wasn't what I was expecting, I can tell you that much. I was assuming that the story would decline into something... less original. A fortune ...

Hello again, MrAwesomeSauce. Here to review as promised. So, this was a pretty short, to-the-point piece, so this might end up being a pretty short, to-the-point review. First of all, ...