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Re: The Shift: Chapter 2 And 3!
Okay, chapter 2! Right away, I'll say that I thought the same about this chapter. It seemed a bit more dull than I thought it would be, because I know ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: The Shift: Chapter 1 (Pretty much redid the entire thing)
Hey Unicorn! Here to review as requested. ^^ First thing's first - I don't know if I love this or like it or if it's just... okay quite yet. Why? ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: The Aborted Child
Hello Cad, here to review as requested. ^^ This poem has.... potential? I guess? - But I'm really sorry to say that I didn't enjoy it much at all. It ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: The Concord Ch. 1
Hi PinkAngel! Here to review as requested. ^^ First off, I suppose that I'll go into nitpicks (In the spoiler): They were kept in the old slave forts. Mickey and ...
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: Figure Skating
Hi Eli! ^-^ Here as requested! (Sorry it took a little longer than I expected. xD) First of all - I am going to say that I disagree with Tin ...
Apr 23, 2011 -
Re: Please don't eat me!
Hi Cupcake! Here to review as requested! ^^ First of all, I'll just say that this was a very cute, fun to read poem. There isn't much I can review ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: Falling Apart
Hello Nite! ^^ Here to review as requested. I just wanted to say that I did and didn't like this poem - it was simple, it had its own level ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Call Me Mr. Ailuro~(1.1)
Shrubs! I am finally here with this review! Sorry it took so long! I've been busy. >.< First off.... Meh, nitpicks. Why not? xD People would adore their curled up ...
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: Hush
Hello! Here to review as requested - and I sincerely apologize for making you wait so long. I've had a rough few days. xD But, I'm here now. And, honestly, ...
Apr 15, 2011 -
Re: Behind The Cloud Of Dreams
Hey Ehte! I would repeat 'here as requested' but. You know. So, first of all - I didn't really like the wording in the first stanza. Kyll explained that pretty ...
Apr 15, 2011 -
Re: Beauty
Hello again Ehte! Here to review as requested! ^-^ Again, I apologize for making you wait so long for the review. First of all - I did like this poem, ...
Apr 15, 2011 -
Re: All's My Fault
Hey Ehte! Here as requested! Sorry it took me so long to get here, it's been a rough few days. >.< Anyways - it would seem that you already have ...
Apr 15, 2011 -
Re: when the morning light comes.
Hey Just! Here to review as requested! (sorry to keep you waiting so long, by the way.) First off, I will say that I agree about breaking this into stanzas ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: A Sleeping Disaster Chapter 3
Okay! Chapter three! First of all - this chapter had its ups and downs. For starters, the writing was still much better than in the first chapter - but you ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: A Sleeping Disaster Chapter 2
Chapter two! Right off the bat, I will tell you that I liked this chapter a lot more than the first one. The style was definitely better, more interesting to ...
Apr 12, 2011