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Re: Say My Name
Awwww.... This is so cute.... XD I loved it.. I guess my cat thinks the same because i do these exact things to him. This is such a poem which ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: Not a home
This is really good.... I always wanted to write something like this which dealt with family and home but here i see you already wrote it. I must say that ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: Season Tides
It is a good poem.... Very well written and as said above very good use of imagery.... In a very proper way you turned your story into these beautiful verses.... ...
Jan 25, 2011 -
Re: What Matters
It is a good piece... It has a good flow and good rhythm it is just that i could not quite understand the last two lines of the second paragraph..... ...
Jan 25, 2011 -
Re: Regress
WOW.... This is just great.... Gross. Brutal. I am not much of a critic so would not point out anything is this flawless,fabulous piece.... Keep up the great work.... :) ...
Jan 25, 2011 -
Re: Girl Next Door.
This is awesome.... Well done mate... Well written.... I would love to sing it if i have a tune.... :) I loved it a lot.... Keep up the great work... ...
Jan 25, 2011 -
Re: I Felt It
Hello there.... That is a nice compliment to the website.... It is truly a great place to be.... But about the poem i should say that it was OK.... Could ...
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: We Do Not Exist For You.
It was nice and you very effectively showed the emotions in your piece... It was too short though could be a bit more lengthy and you could add more spice ...
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: Love III (Masks)
You are here again with another fabulous poem of yours... BRAVO... I loved it...... I liked each and every thing of it.... Good word selection making it touchy.... Liked the ...
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: Dear Self- A Letter to Me from Me
I loved it a lot... This is a thing i do a lot of times when i am sad but i never wrote it down.... It totally relates to me... ...
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: Autmn Leaves
It was a good poem. Really loved your word selection and flow.... I was pretty and short... And you don't need to capitalize the first word of every line.... Only ...
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: Thank You, My Dear
It is a good piece.... I liked what you wanted to tell through your poem... Imagery was good but could have been more better... Try to improve it... To many ...
Jan 19, 2011 -
Re: Take A Walk With Me, Dad.
Awesome buddy... This is just great... Loved this piece through out... I could not see any flaws in it... WOW... Keep up the great work... :D PM me for anything... ...
Jan 19, 2011 -
Re: Your Dream
Another great poem... You get better and better.... I love this one... A great idea for the poem and perfectly executed too... Its short and good but it can be ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Done Feeling Sorry For You
I liked your work... I could the frustration which you might have felt... But it is too short and better use of words could have made it more strong... Well ...
Jan 17, 2011
