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Hello there, When the warm sun comes up, and the snow melts away. When the children come out, and find fun games to play. instead of fun games just use ...

Hello there. You work looks very clumsy at dirty at the very first sight. Let us see what is inside. Just for two moments it just me or i have ...

Hello there, Green is the edge of grass, shooting up in spring a very good start green is the color of my finger when I wear my favorite ring. Green ...

Hello there... Heart-shaped paper scissor-cut Laced with red trim, Box of homemade chocolates delicately wrapped with care, Sunglasses darkly tinted hide my eyes, And I hope that you won’t stare- ...

Hello there, You think the end is near... because nothing's ever clear.. anymore. Instead of using ever clear just use clear And everything changes, you sit and watch, as your ...

Hello there. You open the doors Better just keep it as "door" You let me in Your way of saying you love me You wink at me Make me grin, ...

I loved it. It was very well executed. You almost covered all of the points which the picture shows to us. Very good use of vocabulary. Awesome word selection. Howling ...

Encased in a nightmare I hide behind my hands Waiting for it to disappear Waiting for it to Disperse Does not sound good. Better keep it with the previous line ...

This is a good one... I really loved it a lot. I like your keen of such marvelous words. It makes the poem look beautiful and original. As it is ...

If we were to talk a while Good start You'd be sure to know That all I want is to see you smile And for it not to show That ...

Innocent words, prickling skin. "That's a nice hat! They don't usually suit people with frizzy hair." Sweet as honey, stab in the back. "Wow, I love your new top! I ...

Hey there. This a a very good piece. Very well done mate. It brings out some raw emotions which is very good for a poem like this. Some of the ...

Hello there. This is a good piece. Short and cute. But i agree with Demeter that your punctuations are really confusing. You must know this that a wrong punctuation can ...

It is a good piece... As you said it is a short poem and it is really very short and simple. But even of its being short it is very ...

This one was good.... A very original and a new concept... A challenging work to write something on this topic but you did it... Nicely executed too... But at some ...