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  • The Shadow Blight - Chapters I - IV Please comment...

    Guys please can you post replies on what you think of this? Chapters V and VI coming soon! Chapter I The sun shone brightly over the playing fields, and the ...

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  • The Shadow Blight Chapters 5 & 6 re-formatted

    Chapter V – It begins… Once again, Night shed her dark mantle over the earth, and the Wraith resumed its journey. With the sun safely down, and the moon a ...

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  • The Shadow Blight so far - what do you think?

    The Shadow Blight Chapter I - Cricket If you happened to be flying over Wiltshire from Bristol airport, you might see a small cluster of buildings in the middle of ...

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  • At the Window

    I just wrote this a second ago. I was in a melancholy mood... Any comments? AT THE WINDOW I sit and glance as the seasons pass, At the window. I ...

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  • Battle

    BATTLE The clanging of swords, The beating of drums, The chanting of men, The killing of hopes. The screams of defiance, The screams of hatred, The screams of agony, The ...

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  • Nightfall

    NIGHTFALL The dusky sky is turning blacker, Bright stars are coming out. The blueness is fading away, Night brings her fears and doubts. The Sun is a red ball on ...

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  • The Shadow Blight chapters nine - eleven

    Chapter IX – A Revival, and a Revelation. Ben and Edmund were flagging. For an hour now, the walk had been extremely heavy going. It was as if they had ...

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  • Need Help with Title!

    The crops in the fields sway, As I walk through, lost in thought, I hear the creatures at the end of day, Returning to nests, to their loved ones. Sky ...

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  • Peace

    Guys please could you post your thoughts and any comments on this. Thanks a lot! Outside, night sheds her dark mantle over the school, The rain makes glimmering pools on ...

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  • The Cathedral of God

    Golden dust motes, In a glimmering cascade in the air, From the stained glass windows, The light spills down, white and pure. The marble pillars, Soaring off to the roof, ...

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  • Best Friends?

    Best Friends? You say you’re my friend, You say you’re my pal, But then you ran away, When I needed you most. Where did you go? Why; for whom? You ...

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  • Another Country

    When you close your eyes, On a world of hate, pain and fear, You’ll enter a silent place, Where I’ll be waiting. The world we live in, Full of earthly ...

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