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earendil

earendil

  • Other » General, General Re: A few shorter stories

    I want to come back to these. They're interesting.

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: unlit

    Persy keeps nagging me to come back. So. Here I am. Saving my review spot right hurr.

    May 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: cicadian

    I'm not sure what kind of review I can produce for'ya (it's been a loooong time, looong time now) but I'm saving myself a spot anyway. so HA.

    May 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Just a Dream

    there are a lot less detail that regular writing Interesting... well. Considering my prefered style of poetry is quite different from yours, I'd be inclined to say that lack of ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: ---

    Finally, a chance to review something of yours. I'll have to come back to this as well.

    Mar 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Traces

    I'm holding my place, right here. A review will come soon. The stars tell me so.

    Mar 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: An Ode To Mathematics

    I thought you were going to write about how much you love math - I am very glad to see that this is actually the complete opposite. :P

    Mar 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A Mountain of Hunger

    I really need to review this soon. Gosh. Sorry. I'll get back to it as soon as I can. and THEN the party starts.

    Feb 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Stars

    I'm hesitant to suggest anything, just because this was so... cute :P Haha. Definitely brought a smile to my face. Good write.

    Feb 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Retribution

    Overall, I enjoyed this. Your sentences sometimes sound like just fragments to me, but that's just my personal opinion and can be easily fixed. Other than that, this is short ...

    Feb 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Speedometer

    AAGGGHHH. I accidently pressed "submit" instead of "preview." Since I wasn't able to quote the second stanza of your poem just by editing the comment, I'm going to write another ...

    Feb 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Deleted 5

    Sorry, Coral. Earl Gray > Chamomile, Taste-wise. :P Excellent write.

    Feb 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Riddle

    I'm so over-analytical, it's irritating. Hate riddles! (kidding, kidding.) As the above comment said, my only other guess is water. But that almost seems too simple to be true. :P

    Jan 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Duck Rap

    I really have nothing else to say to this, other than it made my day. Thank you for sharing this :)

    Jan 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: ---

    Thank you, everyone, who took the time to comment. I appreciate all of you stopping by. Originally, this wasn't supposed to be much of a poem. Though.. for the sake ...

    Jan 18, 2011


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