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Frankly I had no clue the piece was double spaced until you commented because I never looked at it after posting. Eww. The poem is actually just the final paragraph ...

God, I just read through this. I need to stop doing this with my phone. mortality, not morality. goodness.

Heya Penguin. Your name sounds familiar. I was writing a lot more a few years ago and I believe I remember seeing you around this site then. However, no, I ...

I appreciate you stopping by, and I am glad you enjoyed it. The poems/prose in Ireland and letters from a shrinks office are the only ones I've ever really come ...

Me again. I'll thank you once more for the kind words and taking the time to visit. The purpose odd enjambment you mentioned, honestly, was just so that I could ...

Greetings. Thank you for taking the time to visit. :) First off, I'm glad you pointed out that bit about the semicolon placement. It does, in fact, read more fluently ...

I appreciate you taking the time to read/review this. Thank you. :)

I like the idea with stained glass. I think I'll take the stanza you said was plain and see if I can work it into there. Thanks for the suggestion, ...

Thanks a bunch for the feedback! I greatly appreciate it. (:

I stop by when I can. Nice to see you as well. I considered and reconsidered editing the piece before submitting, but that almost destroyed the purpose of not hitting ...

I have sincerely missed your work like no other. That is all.

I'll be coming back to this.

world spins madly on. yes.

I haven't really reviewed anything of yours in a while, have I? hm. Well, I'll come back to this.