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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Morning murders.

    This is a really good poem! I love how it's about murder. Is it specifically about hiring an assassin or something? I, personally, enjoy reading poem about death and killing. ...

    May 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Spinning

    I loved this poem! At first glance, I was like, "Oh gosh. It's a long poem, and it's going to be really boring." But after reading it, I was like, ...

    May 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Feel Nothing

    I had no issues with it, and I saw no mistakes or errors. It is very well-written. Actually, it reminds me of my friend who just recently went through a ...

    May 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Heartbreak

    This poem is awesome! I like the title. It fits. I didn't see any grammatical errors or anything. So, yeah. I didn't have any personal issues with it. Overall, it ...

    May 9, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: That delicate touch.

    I really liked this poem! And, as an added bonus, it was appropriate to read today since it's mother's day. The whole time I was reading it, I was like, ...

    May 9, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Path

    I really liked reading this poem. The title was really fitting, and the whole thing was really flowing together like a miniature story. I found no issues with it except ...

    May 9, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: a once beautiful heart.

    I loved reading this. Really, I did. It was awesome! I didn't see any grammatical errors, and I didn't have any issues with it as I often do when reading ...

    May 9, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Grounded

    I like it. It sounds, or at least how I read it, angry. Anger is cool, or at least it is to me. Every night I think about all my ...

    May 9, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Art of Love Chapter 1

    I liked it, and I definitely would like to read more when you get it written. It was well-written, and I really liked the whole plot. I did have to ...

    May 3, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Romance <3

    Hey Ashley! I haven't seen you since you got off the bus yesterday! What have you been up to? Anyway, I liked your poem! I didn't know you wrote poetry! ...

    May 2, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Lands- Chapter 1

    First of all, I love the little girl's name. Uncommon names like that draw my attention. As far as grammar and stuff like that, I didn't see any mistakes, so ...

    May 1, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I'll never let you fall.

    I loved this poem! I like your use of adjectives. They added to the drama and the imagery of the poem. Keep writing! This poem was awesome, and I bet ...

    Apr 16, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Words

    Wow! The poem is so deep. Plus, you titled it perfectly-something I absolutely can't do to save my soul. It's not about death or anything creepy, but it gave me ...

    Apr 15, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Downward

    I liked the poem. Personally, I enjoy the use of large words. To me, it makes the writing funner(I know it's not a real word) to read. Don't think I'm ...

    Apr 15, 2010
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: What is the Best Book you have read...

    My all-time favorite book is A Separate Peace by John Knowles. At first I thought it was going to be really lame and boring, but after a while, I really ...

    Apr 15, 2010


What holds you betwixt panic and serenity? That is, if it's not among the many querulous quagmires unfit for elaboration.
— soundofmind as Emiliano Achillinus