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Re: Morning murders.
This is a really good poem! I love how it's about murder. Is it specifically about hiring an assassin or something? I, personally, enjoy reading poem about death and killing. ...
May 10, 2010 -
Re: Spinning
I loved this poem! At first glance, I was like, "Oh gosh. It's a long poem, and it's going to be really boring." But after reading it, I was like, ...
May 10, 2010 -
Re: Feel Nothing
I had no issues with it, and I saw no mistakes or errors. It is very well-written. Actually, it reminds me of my friend who just recently went through a ...
May 10, 2010 -
Re: Heartbreak
This poem is awesome! I like the title. It fits. I didn't see any grammatical errors or anything. So, yeah. I didn't have any personal issues with it. Overall, it ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: That delicate touch.
I really liked this poem! And, as an added bonus, it was appropriate to read today since it's mother's day. The whole time I was reading it, I was like, ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: The Path
I really liked reading this poem. The title was really fitting, and the whole thing was really flowing together like a miniature story. I found no issues with it except ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: a once beautiful heart.
I loved reading this. Really, I did. It was awesome! I didn't see any grammatical errors, and I didn't have any issues with it as I often do when reading ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: Grounded
I like it. It sounds, or at least how I read it, angry. Anger is cool, or at least it is to me. Every night I think about all my ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: The Art of Love Chapter 1
I liked it, and I definitely would like to read more when you get it written. It was well-written, and I really liked the whole plot. I did have to ...
May 3, 2010 -
Re: Romance <3
Hey Ashley! I haven't seen you since you got off the bus yesterday! What have you been up to? Anyway, I liked your poem! I didn't know you wrote poetry! ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: The Lands- Chapter 1
First of all, I love the little girl's name. Uncommon names like that draw my attention. As far as grammar and stuff like that, I didn't see any mistakes, so ...
May 1, 2010 -
Re: I'll never let you fall.
I loved this poem! I like your use of adjectives. They added to the drama and the imagery of the poem. Keep writing! This poem was awesome, and I bet ...
Apr 16, 2010 -
Re: Words
Wow! The poem is so deep. Plus, you titled it perfectly-something I absolutely can't do to save my soul. It's not about death or anything creepy, but it gave me ...
Apr 15, 2010 -
Re: Downward
I liked the poem. Personally, I enjoy the use of large words. To me, it makes the writing funner(I know it's not a real word) to read. Don't think I'm ...
Apr 15, 2010 -
Re: What is the Best Book you have read...
My all-time favorite book is A Separate Peace by John Knowles. At first I thought it was going to be really lame and boring, but after a while, I really ...
Apr 15, 2010
