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Hi there! Welcome to YWS, sueprin! :D First off, I liked this poem. It's very powerful and tells a dramatic little story. Nice! I feel. I see. I wonder, I ...

Hi there! First off, welcome to YWS, ALM. (If you don't mind my calling you that.) :) Anyway, I really liked this poem. It sort of reminded me of some ...

Hi there! :D Review tiiiiime! :D :D :D (Sorry, just a little hyper...) But, anywho, the review. I really liked this poem. At first glance, the way it was written ...

Hi there, and welcome to YWS, AR. (If you don't mind me calling you that for short...) Anyway... review time... First off, I liked it. You chose an often-used topic, ...

Hi there! Haha, I haven't reviewed anything in a while, so please forgive me if this isn't all that great. Anyway, onto the review. I really liked this poem. When ...

Hey! Anyway, I really liked this. I'm surprised that you don't write poetry a lot. This is definitely not an amateur piece. It didn't really have a flow or anything, ...

Hi! I have only one thing to say.. Beautiful! This is so well-written and pretty! It's very heart-touching. It's truly an amazing piece! I have no critiques and I'm sorry, ...

Hi! First off, might I suggest breaking this poem into stanzas? It would be much more pleasing to the eyes. :) Okay, off we go into the poem. And hanging ...

Hi there! First off, I love the title. It's pretty awesome! Anyway, I didn't see any grammatical mistakes, which is very good. I really have no nit-picks about anything. The ...

This poem reminds me so much of my sister and her personal issues, which I will not get into right now, but anyway, I like it! I could really feel ...

Okay! So, first off, woo! I skimmed over it first, just to see how long it was, and I was like, "Oh no! Longness!" But I have to say, I'm ...

So, hi! First off, this poem is pretty cool. I liked reading it. You rhymed! I personally love poems that rhyme, so that's a win for me! The whole poem ...

Oh I love this! It is very beautiful and sad. I have absolutely no criticism and no suggestions because I wouldn't change anything about it. I love all the imagery ...

Actually, it's pretty good! A few things though: He leaves in the morning with no clues With his naughty, haughty puss Right here, I thought the rhyme sounded a little ...

Oh, I read through this, and I loved it! I did have a few personal issues with it. (They don't need to be changed. They just bother me personally) The ...