dystopianmonkey01

I likey Concise, beautiful. Only thing: I think that another line would have been good in between the 3rd and 4th line, only because I get the vibe that it ...

Veeeery nice. Well done, I love it. One thing: " Eyes closed, I am blind to the distant rainbow that cannot be touched. " I've been staring at this line ...

Damn, totally awestruck. 'Tis really sad, and brings back painful memories of loved ones. I love it. For me, I would have preferred if it were a tad more to ...

Hey! I like this poem a lot, it makes you think. A few suggestions though: In your 3rd and 4th stanzas, it disrupts your rhyme scheme. As far as I ...

This is so good and so insightful. From experience I can say, being in RE class with more or less the POPE as your teacher XD, it does spoon feed ...

I like this a lot. Very good start. Your opening sentences really say a lot, which is always good. As I always say to everyone, try to use more descriptive ...

Hey. I'm guilty of crying while reading this :') My best friend attempted suicide last year. She suffered from anxiety too. I can basically feel your emotion through the words. ...

Love this! I can tell just by reading this that you are a very intelligent person. Inevitably, here and there, there's a few grammar errors, particularly in your first paragraph. ...

Hey! Nice work on this. You did awesome in the rhyming scheme of things. Clap clap, it's hard to do and you did it almost perfectly so good job. For ...

Great! Very concise, to the point. I like that in poems. Sometimes simplicity is great. One thing I must commend you for is how this writing flows. Not necessarily with ...

This is a great start. It really draws you in. I do enjoy the storyline a lot! A couple suggestions: For one, you do change your tenses often, which is ...